Thursday, July 22, 2010

Deceased Thoughts

What do you think they think of ?
Thought of the flowers on their grave
Or how their loved one gets to stay

Thought of the ring on her finger
And their love that will last forever
In your heart I'll never leave

Just to let you know your never alone
I'm always here...In your heart and soul.

Author
Samantha Lyles

5 comments:

Tanya said...

Very good for your first poem Sammy! I love the title and the first stanza.

Dustin_Shane said...

This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it very much so. I see some good potential to follow in your mum's footsteps.

jimi_hendrix said...

dark but visual with alittle bit ofhopefullness. people die but they never leave your head.

Tayla. (: said...

For a first poem this was really great!
:D
I am glad to see more writers, writing from their hearts.

Sammy said...

Thanks guys!