Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Resting Rock

She lay there among the silk and fancy attire. She looked as if she were a wilted flower resting on a polished stone in an unattended garden, beautiful but lifeless. Her skin powdered with a white mask, she never wore her makeup that light. We did not believe it was her at first, however she bare the ring her sister bought her. A stranger to her but an acquaintance spoke on her behalf, as she lay there in silence. Some say when the body dies it will rest until it is time; we felt her presence there, as if she was an angel in the choir. Maybe among the voices there, hers was the sweatiest, she always did love the song, Amazing Grace.

Author
Tanya L. Lyles

3 comments:

Dustin_Shane said...

This one painted a picture in my head. This is very cool. As the best English teacher I ever had said, "A picture says a thousand words, but a thousand words paint a picture." - Mr. N

I do realize this is not a thousand words. But that adds to the beauty of it. You didn't have to use a thousand words.

Tanya said...

Thank you. It sounds like your English teacher Mr. N made a great impression on you.

Dustin_Shane said...

Yes he did. Not only was he my teacher but he was a very good friend. Taught me quite a few life lessons. And taught me a lot about writing and the appreciation of literature. He is on this blog now. It is Mr. Neuburger. He posted A Rosary, St. Christopher, And A Six Pack.