Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Sweet Memory

Remember moonlit strolls we shared,
Below those sacred cliffs,
Before we laughed, we loved, or cared,
Ere tide came in on shifts.

5 comments:

Unknown said...

Short and sweet. I love it.

Dustin_Shane said...

I wrote it when I was living up in Miller here while back. I actually had probably ten stanzas total when I first wrote it. But the first one got my point across very well so I cut out the rest of it.

Tanya said...

Excellent work Dustin! The feeling and vision is there. This is when you know it's a wonderful poem!

Tayla. (: said...

Reminds me some what of something Mr. Poe would say.
:D

Dustin_Shane said...

I can see this correlation now that you mention it. I did read his work quite thoroughly and he is one of the many poets who inspired me to write. Thank you very much.